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Band 5+: You are moving to a new apartment and need to arrange for internet service installation. Write a letter to the internet service provider to request the installation. Include: - your new address and preferred installation date - the type of internet plan you are interested in - any specific requirements for the installation process

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to request your service in installing internet connection as I am planning to relocate to the nearby city in the upcoming month.

The house is situated only 12 kilometers away from my current location;in fact exactly at the center of the Newton street.Its a single storyed home situated opposite to the church,building number 112.Moreover,I will be there by 17th Ocober and I would be appreciated if you could complete the installation by the end of the month.

Since I will be working from home,I need a stable and high speed internet connection as that would be necessary for conducting uninterrupted meetings and vedio conferences.Therefore,I am planning to take a subcrption for the premium plan which valid up to one year.

I prefer to restore my internet connection and all the installation process within two days because previously you took one week for the restoration.In addition,I would like to know whether you could purchase the equipments and parts needed for the service.

Hoping for prompt reply from your side.

Your faithfuly,

Megha

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

internet: 3

connection: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by including the new address, preferred installation date, the type of internet plan, and specific requirements for the installation process. However, there are some areas for improvement. The letter could benefit from more precise details regarding the preferred installation date and specific requirements. For example, instead of saying 'by the end of the month,' a specific date would be more helpful. Also, the request to purchase equipment could be clearer. Overall, the letter is well-written and fulfills the requirements of the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction stating your purpose, followed by paragraphs detailing your address and preferred installation date, the type of internet plan you're interested in, and any specific requirements for the installation process. This will enhance the flow and clarity of your message.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and varied. For example, instead of 'nearby city,' you could specify the city's name. Using more specific terms related to internet services and installation would also enhance the letter. For instance, instead of 'restore my internet connection,' you could say 'complete the internet installation.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect the clarity of the letter. Pay close attention to sentence structure, punctuation, and word choice. For example, 'I would be appreciated if you could complete the installation' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'I would appreciate it if you could complete the installation.' Proofread carefully to correct these errors.

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