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Band 5+: You are moving to a new apartment and need to arrange for internet service installation. Write a letter to the internet service provider to request the installation. Include: - your new address and preferred installation date - the type of internet plan you are interested in - any specific requirements for the installation process

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to bring to your attention about connecting internet at my new apartment.

Since I have moved my apartment in a new area, so I need internet connection in my home. My new apartement located is opposite the bus station and next to the public library, which called Gorge Road, and apartment number is B55. If you need anything please call me without any hasitation, my cell phone nymber is 0125487521.

As I am a full time worker, morning would be best time to installation the internet. To be more specific you can come after the breakfast. Before I go to the office we can help you manage everything that you need.

I would be if you give me original product such as router and other connection metarials. I want to connect with modern onece like netflixe and opera systems.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,

Sharif Ahemd

Word Count: 161

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

internet: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by providing the new address, contact information, preferred installation times, and a specific requirement. However, the letter could be improved by providing more specific dates for the installation and elaborating on the type of connection desired. The tone is generally appropriate, but some sentences could be phrased more clearly and professionally. For example, instead of "I would be if you give me original product," you could write "I would appreciate it if you could provide original equipment."

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to your address/contact information, preferred installation times, and specific requirements. Using more formal transition phrases would also enhance the letter's coherence.

Lexical Resource

While the vocabulary is generally adequate, there's room to enhance it with more precise and varied word choices. For example, instead of 'connection metarials,' you could use 'equipment' or 'hardware.' Also, 'modern onece like netflixe and opera systems' is unclear and needs rephrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that impact clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For instance, 'My new apartement located is' should be 'My new apartment is located.' Also, 'morning would be best time to installation the internet' needs correction.

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