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Band 5+: You are organizing a charity event for a local organization and want to invite community members to participate. Write a letter to your community members inviting them to the event. You should include details about: - the purpose of the charity event and why it is important - the date, time, and location of the event - what attendees should bring or how they can contribute to the event.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to formally invite you on a charity fundrising event for a local organziation called XYZ care for uplifting its involvement on old age care support.

This organization is supporting old people from our community since last 20 years. As of now, XYZ care is struggling financially and its high time we support them in their bad phase. Event will take place of Big park, 5th of May 2025, 7 AM-11.00 AM.

Additionally, Different local business will be selling local products to support the old age care. Hence, please make your wallet big for cashing it out. Futhmore, On the right side of the park there is donation counter, where you can donate money as per your capacity.

Furthermore, Supporting these types of organization is very important to mantain proper ecosystem of our community.

I am hoping for your active participation for the betterment of old age care and our community.

Your’s Faithfully,

Bcool

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by including the necessary information. However, some aspects could be improved for better clarity and impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be smoother with improved sentence structure and paragraphing. The numerous grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that hinder understanding and impact the overall quality. Significant improvement in grammar is needed.

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