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Band 4+: You are organizing a class reunion. Write a letter to your former classmates. You should include: - Explain why you are organizing the reunion - Suggest a location, date and time - Suggest activities and ask for their ideas and preferences

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Dear Aldo

Hallo mate, how are you? Hope you doing well, long time no see,

I think about 5 years now after we are graduatiny from our university, I feel like it was just yesterday we are in the Same dormitory, running to the class because late for waking up, doing volunter together with all our friends in the class, suci a so much Joy, I have a plan that we can make a small reunion for our classmates,

We can do the reunion in weekend, and we can massage our friend early so they can schedules our reunion in their time, we can just going to the beach or going picnic together, doing barbeque time, have a chitchat like we used to, just like have a small party, In think they also miss spending time together, at least just sharing our thought together is already enough.

So I really need your help too help me arranged this event, Can you help me making a group chat for our event? Because I don’t have the contact of some of our friends.

So please let me know what you thought Aldy,

Kind regards

Adhisa

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

together: 4

doing: 3

reunion: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks specific details required. It mentions a weekend but no specific date or venue. Food and entertainment are vaguely described as 'barbeque' and 'chitchat', but not clearly. The request for help is limited to creating a group chat, which is only one task. To improve, include a concrete date and venue, specify food and entertainment options, and list multiple tasks you need help with.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a logical structure but lacks clear paragraphing and cohesion. Ideas are presented in a single block, making it hard to follow. Use separate paragraphs for each main point: greeting, reunion details, food/entertainment, and tasks. Use linking words like 'Firstly', 'Additionally', 'Finally' to improve flow.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is limited and repetitive (e.g., 'together' used multiple times). Some words are misspelled ('volunter', 'suci', 'massage' for 'message', 'schedules' for 'schedule'). Use a wider range of words and check spelling. For example, 'reunion', 'barbecue', 'chat', 'arrange'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammar errors: missing articles ('a small reunion'), incorrect verb forms ('we are graduatiny', 'they schedules'), and run-on sentences. Punctuation is missing (e.g., after greeting). Practice using correct tenses and sentence structures. Proofread carefully.

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