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Band 7+: You are organizing a class reunion. Write a letter to your former classmates. You should include: - Explain why you are organizing the reunion - Suggest a location, date and time - Suggest activities and ask for their ideas and preferences

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Hello Selin,

I hope you are doing well. It has been a long time since we last saw each other.

There will be a high school reunion next saturday at our high school at 14.00 p.m. Our teachers are also invited. As far as I heard, there will be a juice bar and a snack bar. You can also cook something yourself and bring it there. Activity wise, they are bringing caraoke machines and and a volleyball net. In the evening, the school’s current music band will play the old songs. I think it is going to be really nice.

If you are seeing anyone from hight school, could you please forward this invitation to them so that they can attend as well?

Looking forward to seeing all of you there!

Best regards.

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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, providing the date, time, and location, a brief overview of activities, and a request to share the information. There are no significant omissions. To improve, consider adding more specific details to enhance the invitation's appeal and ensure clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the purpose is clear. However, the flow could be improved with more sophisticated transitions between ideas. For example, when transitioning from the mention of teachers to the juice and snack bar, a smoother connection could enhance the readability. Also, avoid using very short sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more varied and descriptive language. For instance, instead of 'really nice,' consider using more evocative adjectives to describe the event. Also, avoid using informal words such as 'caraoke'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors that need attention. For example, 'next saturday' should be 'next Saturday,' and 'at 14.00 p.m.' should be 'at 2:00 p.m.' or 'at 14:00'. Also, avoid using 'and and'. Pay close attention to punctuation and capitalization to improve clarity.

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