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Band 6+: You are organizing a farewell party for a colleague who is leaving the company. Write a letter to your team members to invite them to the dinner. You should mention: - The reason for the party and express your appreciation for the colleague - Details of the venue, time, and date of the party - Request for them to RSVP.

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Dear Team,

With sadly, our wonderful colleague, Ann, will be leave at the end of this week. She was a part of our team for five years and 2 months. In that time, she is show in our team professionalism, hard working, respectful and teamwork. She has always been ready to help, and her positivism has made our office a better place. We will miss her.

To show our appreciation, we were doing together a dinner. Join us on Friday, September 12th, at 7:00 p.m. at Salat Restaurant, located at the street Vasile Lupu 59, Florești. Ann and I will be very happy to see you. It will be a nice opportunity to share memories, enjoy dinner together, and wish her success in the future.

Please let me an answer by Wednesday, September 10th, if you succeed, so I can finalize the reservation.

Looking forward to seeing everyone there!

With respect, our manager, Alexandra!

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, including the reason for the party, details of the event, and a request for RSVP. The tone is suitable for the context. To improve, pay closer attention to grammatical accuracy and word choice to enhance clarity and fluency.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the opening sentence is awkward and unclear. The purpose of the letter is clear, and the details of the party are provided. However, the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. For example, the transition from expressing appreciation to the party details could be smoother. Also, avoid using 'With sadly' and instead use a more appropriate phrase such as 'It is with sadness'. Consider reorganizing the sentences in the first paragraph to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are some inaccuracies and unnatural expressions. For example, 'she is show in our team professionalism' is not correct. Use more precise and natural vocabulary to describe Ann's contributions and qualities. Instead of 'positivism', use 'positivity'. Vary your vocabulary to make the letter more engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'will be leave' should be 'will be leaving', and 'let me an answer' should be 'let me know'. Pay attention to verb tense agreement, article usage ('the street Vasile Lupu 59'), and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to correct these errors. Also, the closing 'With respect, our manager, Alexandra!' is a bit awkward. Consider using 'Sincerely,' or 'Best regards,' followed by your name and title.

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