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Band 4+: You are organizing a weekend hiking trip with a local hiking club and want to invite a friend who is new to hiking. Write a letter to your friend inviting them on the hiking trip. You should include details about: - the location and difficulty level of the hike - what they need to bring (clothing, gear, etc.) - what to expect during the hike (e.g., scenery, challenges, duration)

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Dear, my freind

This is Sujin here. I am planing to hike next end of the momth. I would like you to join our group activity for hiking trip as you expressed me your interst.

The location will be In-wang mountain where located in end of the south of Seoul.

You can reach there by Metro at Hong-jae station or go with me by car.

As you are a new to hiking, you need to bring some equipment as like sticks and waterbottle, hiking shoes, unbrella.

Finally, the date is coming to enjoy the hiking together. However, so that It could be a safety trip to you, I recommend you to prepare your relaxed mucles and strong body. For that you need to work out everyday.

See you soon!

Sincerely yours.

Sujin

Word Count: 132

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hiking: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by inviting the friend and including some details about the location, equipment, and route. However, the information provided is somewhat basic and lacks depth. To improve, provide more specific details about the hike's difficulty, the exact route, potential challenges, and highlights. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and clarity to ensure the message is easily understood. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between ideas to guide the reader. For example, when transitioning from discussing the location to the necessary equipment, a transitional phrase would help. Paragraphing could also be improved to separate distinct topics more clearly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to fully convey the details of the hiking trip. For instance, instead of saying 'end of the south of Seoul,' you could provide a more specific location description. Try to incorporate more descriptive words related to hiking and equipment to enhance clarity. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that impede understanding. Errors in sentence structure, verb tense, and article usage are present. For example, 'I am planing' should be 'I am planning,' and 'as you expressed me your interst' should be 'as you expressed your interest to me.' Focus on proofreading carefully and practicing sentence construction to improve accuracy.

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