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Band 5+: You are part of a book club and are hosting the next meeting at your home. Invite the other members. Write a letter to the book club members inviting them to your home. You should include details about: - the date, time, and address of the meeting - the book that will be discussed - any refreshments or activities you are planning.

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Dear book club members,

I hope this letter finds you well. It would be a pleasure for me to invite you all on September 10th to discuss the latest book at my home. You might have heard that recently I have moved to a new house so I write here the new address: it’s “Chaplard Street 12”.

I have already chosen a book for the debate, but I would love to hear your thoughts about it, therefore if you have any other options I’m absolutely available to welcome them. The book I have opt for it’s called “Wuthering Heights”, it’s about a tormented lovestory of two youngsters that due to lies and pride never go togheter. I don’t want to spoiler you anything about the drammatic endig, thus I gently invite you all to read it by yourself before we will talk about it togheter next week.

For this discussion you don’t need any specific preparation other than briging with you a couple of copy so at the moment we debate we can read some passages.

Please feel free to contact me for any suggestions about the books you would like to discuss on and if for everybody it’s acceptable the date I have proposed.

Best regards,

Word Count: 207

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 5

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, providing details about the book, meeting time/location, and preparation needed. However, there are some minor lapses in tone and formality. To improve, focus on maintaining a consistently formal tone throughout the letter and ensure clarity in your explanations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter generally conveys the necessary information, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating a separate paragraph to each key point (book details, meeting specifics, preparation). Transition phrases could also be used to link ideas more smoothly. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to this' or 'Furthermore' to connect related ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are opportunities to use more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'debate,' you could use 'discussion' or 'analysis.' Varying your word choice can make the letter more engaging. Also, pay attention to the correct usage of prepositions and articles.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper article usage. For example, 'I have opt for' should be 'I have opted for.' Proofreading carefully and using grammar checking tools can help improve accuracy. Also, try to use a mix of simple and complex sentences to demonstrate grammatical range.

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