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Band 5+: You are planning a community picnic to promote neighborhood bonding and want to invite all your neighbors. Write a letter to your neighbors inviting them to the picnic. You should include details about - the purpose of the picnic and why it's important for the community - when and where the picnic will take place - what activities or food they should bring or prepare for the picnic.

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Dear Mr/Ms,

I hope you are in good condition, I am writing this letter for promotion neighborhood bonding my plan in community picnic and I want to invit you to join to the picnic.

The purpose of the picnic are to improve interaction each other, to do activities together and to be solid as a big family.

My schedule plan is this months around 17 august or 20 august based on our free time. the location is in Malang garden at Soekarno Hatta Road. But the time and location is flexible if you want to changes the schedule we will discuss together before we do reschedule.

For activity during the event, I already make some plan such as barbeque, camping, and playing game. If you have others idea let me know soon.

This event is for us, so i hope you will be full support and we can prepare this event early.

Thank you for your attention.

Your neighbor

Reta

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses the task by conveying the purpose, time, location, and activities of the picnic. However, some aspects could be more clearly explained for better understanding.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing to enhance clarity and readability. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and understanding. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for better communication.

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