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Band 5+: You are planning a surprise birthday party for a close friend and need help from their family. However, you don't have their contact information. Write a letter to a mutual friend explaining the situation and requesting the family's contact information. You should include: - the purpose of the party and why it's a surprise - details about the type of contact information you need - assurances that the information will be kept confidential.

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Dear lean , i hope you are doing okay i am writing to you to ask for your help i am planing to do a surprise birthday party to our dear friend Ream becauase she has an upcoming birthday and its super fun to do it as a surprise she will fall for it,

i need your help to get Ream’s family contact information either a phone number on email address so i can coordinate with them, could you please provide me the information i need and i asure you this infomation would be kept completly confidential , thank you so much for your help i appreciate it ,

looking forwad to your reply ,

best regards

your friend Amani

Word Count: 120

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the purpose of the party, the need for contact information, and assuring confidentiality. However, the letter could benefit from more specific details to enhance clarity and persuasiveness. For example, elaborating on the type of coordination needed with the family or providing a more compelling reason for the surprise could strengthen the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring the letter into clearer paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of your request (purpose, details, assurance). This will enhance the flow and readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it. For example, instead of 'super fun to do it as a surprise,' you could use more descriptive phrases like 'a delightful surprise' or 'an unforgettable celebration'. Also, vary your word choice to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper punctuation. For example, 'planing' should be 'planning,' and 'infomation' should be 'information.' Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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