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Letter

Band 4+: You are planning a surprise birthday party for a close friend and need to ask another mutual friend for help. Write a letter to your friend. You should include: - why you are writing the letter - what help you need from them - details of the party (date, time, location)

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Hello everyone is Masha’s friend!

I am writing you, because Masha’s birthday is soon. And I so need to your help and support. I want to do this party is wonderful and amazing. We should do make big surprise from Masha, I hope, she attention to this will be good.

I already did plan this surprise party. But, I need to small help for yourself. You should to buy some snacks and drinks from party. Don’t forget also buy glasses, please. You so will be help me.

There is I am writing details of this party right now. Party is starting at 8.30 pm, twenty-sixth of October, please going to 7.00 pm, in order to prepare everything and everyone, before started party. I am already expecting this evening. At so, I hope your helping me so, please don’t forget everything, it’s so important to me and Masha’s birthday.

Thank you, so much,

See you soon, Alina.

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
party: 6
masha's: 3
please: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task by explaining the purpose, requesting help, and providing party details. However, the language contains inaccuracies and awkward phrasing, which affects clarity. To improve, focus on using more natural and accurate English, and ensure the tone is consistently friendly and clear.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas is frequently disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve coherence, consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction stating your purpose, followed by specific requests and details, and a concluding paragraph. Using transitional phrases can also help to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inappropriate. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary that is more specific and relevant to the context of planning a party. For example, instead of 'do make big surprise,' you could use 'organize a grand surprise.' Also, ensure that the words you choose accurately convey your intended meaning. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms, missing articles, and awkward sentence structures. To improve your grammatical accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Review each sentence carefully to ensure it is grammatically correct and conveys your intended meaning clearly. Consider using simpler sentence structures to avoid errors.

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