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Band 4+: You are planning a trip to another country and would like to rent an apartment during your stay. Write a letter to a rental agency requesting information about available apartments. In your letter, you should include: - the dates you will be visiting - the location you prefer - any specific features that you require in the apartment.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing you to request for information about rental apartment for me. I have planned for trip in nearby cities Dhaka for a weeek and i want to rent a apartment. i will be visiting there from 7th may to 14th may and i do not have any place to stay there.

i want to rent a flat because we are three member thats why i need a two bedroom flat,it will be around 1000square feet and i want it close to biggest shopping mall. However, please check the washroom before take this apartment. Actually, some lavatory tap does not run properly. Moreover i have a budegt i would like to take aparment around 2000 taka for per night.

i would request you to infrom me if you find any suitable apartment for me. I would be grateful to you.

Iam looking forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully,

Sabrina

Word Count: 153

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
apartment: 4
would: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

7
The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, including the dates, type of apartment, and budget. However, there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, the request to check the washroom seems a bit out of place in an initial inquiry. To improve, focus on using more precise language and ensuring the tone remains formal and appropriate for a rental agency.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each key point: your travel dates, apartment preferences, and budget. Using more formal transition words and phrases would also enhance the connection between ideas.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is quite basic. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to apartment rentals, such as 'amenities,' 'proximity,' 'fully furnished,' or 'rental agreement.' This will make your letter more informative and professional.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles (a, an, the). Proofreading carefully before submitting would help catch these errors.

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