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Band 6+: You are planning a weekend trip to a historical site and want to invite a family member to join you. Write a letter to your family member inviting them on the trip. You should include details about: - the historical site, why you chose it, and its significance - planned activities and the overall itinerary for the weekend - any costs involved and what they need to bring.

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Hi, I have some exciting news to share! I’m planning to go to the [insert name of historical site] this weekend and I wouls love for you to join me. There will be a tour guide walking us through our whole experience, explaining the meaning behind each and every artifact. I genuinely believe this would be an interesting and knowledgeable activity for the both of us. The plan is to take a walk around the musuem for 35 minutes, and then eat at the Italian restaurant located on the premises, and then resume our tour. You are welcome to come over at my house after! It would be helpful for you to bring 100AED for the tour guide but don’t worry the food and drinks are on me! Hope to hear back from you soon

Love,

Sarah Ann

Word Count: 138

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task by inviting a family member on a trip and including details about why they might enjoy it, the itinerary, and costs. However, the itinerary could be more detailed, and the letter could benefit from a more developed and engaging tone to enhance its persuasive quality. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider using more distinct paragraphs to separate the reasons for inviting the family member, the itinerary, and the cost details. Adding transitional phrases would also enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to incorporate more descriptive words and varied expressions to make the letter more engaging. For example, instead of 'interesting and knowledgeable activity,' you could use 'enriching and insightful experience.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are a few grammatical errors that need attention. For instance, 'wouls' should be 'would,' and 'musuem' should be 'museum.' Also, ensure correct punctuation throughout the letter. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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