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Band 5+: You are planning to go to a music concert in your town and would like a friend to accompany you. Write a letter to invite your friend to the concert you are planning to go to. In your letter, say: + what the content of the music concert is where and when the music concert is why you think your friend should go to this concert

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Dear Pamela,

How have you been lately? I hope you are doing well.I am writing this letter to extend an invitation to you to attend a music concert here in my town.It is called Nhung Thanh Pho Mo Mang and it is one of the biggest music events held annually in Ha Noi,Viet Nam.

The concert will take place on 30 November,2024 and I believe you would immerse yourself in the vibrant,enthusiastic atmosphere this event displays.Each of these live shows brings together dozens of famous artists,attracting more than 6,000 participants with various music genres such as Vietnamese indie,underground music,…I will personally ensure that you will have an unforgettable experience if you attend this concert.

I would love for you to join.It would be great to catch up and enjoy the day together.Let me know if you can make it!

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon

Best regards,

Luna

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

music: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements could enhance the clarity and impact of the invitation.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter flows reasonably well, but some improvements in sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and mostly accurate, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would improve the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall fluency and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is essential.

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Dear Pamela, How have you been lately? I hope you are doing well.I am writing this letter to extend an invitation to you to attend a music concert here in my town.It is called Nhung Thanh Pho Mo Mang and it is one of the biggest music events held annually in Ha Noi,Viet Nam. The […]

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