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Band 4+: You are planning to go to Paris for a week and have seen a hotel online that you would like to stay in. Write a letter to the hotel manager. You know her name. In your letter - explain how long you want to stay and that you want a double room. - ask for more information about the hotel facilities. - ask for recommendations of activities that you could do

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Dear Mr Sahil,

I am writing to enquire about your hotel, which I found online on YourHotel.com.

I am planning to come to Paris at the end of this week either on the 23rd May or 26th May and I am stay in your hotel almost two weeks. Although I would like to know that if you have any double rooms available at that time.

I would also like to know that if your hotel has facilities such as Gym, Garden, Swimming pool or any other facilities. While my wife likes to walk in the Garden for improving her mood and my 10 year old child likes to swim.

Furthermore, I am coming with my family so I would like some suggestion about the best places in the Paris due to we have no knowledge about the Paris and we only know the Eiffel tower is the famous place in Paris.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Nadeem nirban.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

hotel: 3

paris: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses most of the points in the task, such as explaining the length of stay, requesting a double room, asking about hotel facilities, and seeking recommendations for activities. However, there are some inaccuracies and lack of clarity in the information provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks cohesion. There are issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Additionally, some sentences are unclear and could be better structured for improved coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and awkward phrasings throughout the letter. More precise and appropriate word choices would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors in the letter, including verb tense inconsistencies, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation errors. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of structures would boost the score in this criterion.

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