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Band 4+: You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven t finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you haven't handed in the project yet request more time to do it.

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Dear mr. Chris

My name is Manvi and I am studying in Fanshawe college in a second year and my program is Fitness and Health Promotion, I am writing this letter to you because, the Project you gave us on 20th of april regarding Anatomy model, which was due on 30th of April I have not finished it yet because I am suffering from severe fever as well as I am not feeling well. However, I made some of the points by taking help from my friend from your criteria

I am requesting you to give me two a three days for completing the project as you can check my records that I never missed a deadline of any project or assignment. I hope you will understand my condition into consideration and grand me an extension.

Your Sincerely,

Manvi

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, introducing the writer, explaining the reason for not finishing the project, and requesting more time. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but the overall message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and varied language and proofread carefully for errors. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you could add a sentence at the end of the first paragraph to clearly state the purpose of your letter. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words to convey your message more effectively. For instance, instead of 'not feeling well,' you could describe your symptoms more precisely.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, the sentence 'I am requesting you to give me two a three days' contains errors. Review basic grammar rules and proofread carefully to minimize these mistakes.

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