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Band 5+: You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Ask for some suggestions for what to do Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

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I am writing to request information about my trip to Tashkent, next month for my vocation.

My travel will go on 3 days from 3rd to 6th October. In these days, I want to know more about Tashkent and it’s towns. Furthermore, It said there are many historical places, and entertainment dream parks.

I would appreciate If you give me any suggestions for what to do during the trip, and what clothes I need to take, because It is my first visit to Tashkent.

I genuinely value guidance and tips you can provide t ease my transition to the new city. I look forward to catching up soon and creating more memories together.

Thank you for your support, and let’s plan a meet up once I’m settled in

Warm regards

Gulnaz

Word Count: 131

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, clearly stating the duration of the stay, requesting suggestions for activities, and inquiring about local events. However, the tone is slightly informal for a letter to a tourist information centre, and some sentences could be more precise. To improve, focus on maintaining a formal tone throughout the letter and ensuring clarity in your requests. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for better clarity. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each of your main points: the duration of your stay, requests for suggestions, and inquiries about local events. This will make it easier for the reader to follow your message. Also, the closing feels a bit abrupt and doesn't directly relate to the request for tourist information. A more formal and direct closing would be more appropriate.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and descriptive words related to tourism and travel. For example, instead of 'entertainment dream parks,' you could mention specific types of attractions like 'theme parks' or 'recreational areas.' Using more precise language will make your requests clearer and more engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect the clarity of your letter. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, correct article usage (a/an/the), and sentence structure. For example, 'My travel will go on 3 days' should be rephrased as 'My trip will last for 3 days' or 'I will be staying for 3 days.' Proofreading carefully and focusing on basic grammar rules will help improve your accuracy.

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Band 5+: You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Ask for some suggestions for what to do Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Ask for some suggestions for what to do Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Ask for some suggestions for what to do Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

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