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Band 4+: You are working as a waiter waitress in a restaurant. You are going to resign from your job. Write to yhe restaurant manager. In your letter: Why you are resigning? What good things you have got from your job? What you want the restaurant to do (e.g. give salary earlier, reference letter).

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter about my work. I am working as a waiter in the a restaurant. I am going to resign from my job.

I am working this restaurant for many years. But I am just working as a waiter and there do not have enough environments for example;bevery month workers take a low wages and also the bosses give salary very late.

So, I found new job , this job have enough conditions, their bosses will give salary earlier and all workers take a good wages every month. In my opinion these are well things than your in a restaurant.

However, if you in a restaurant will have enough environments and you will give salary earlier, also all workers will take high wages. I will turn back this letter to my own.I want what I wrote above to be true from you and this restaurant.

I hope you will read this letter and you will find solutions to these problems.

Yours faithfully,

Aziza Avazbekova

Word Count: 169

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

letter: 3

working: 3

restaurant: 3

enough: 3

workers: 3

wages: 3

salary: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, explaining the reason for resigning, mentioning the positive aspects of the current job, and stating what improvements are desired. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to each point to enhance clarity and depth.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with organization and clarity. The ideas could be better structured with more logical progression between sentences and paragraphs. Additionally, some sentences are unclear and need revision for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. More precise and varied vocabulary could be employed to enhance the overall quality of writing. Additionally, there are grammatical errors that affect the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation and sentence construction need improvement for better accuracy. Proofreading for grammar and punctuation is recommended to avoid errors.

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Band 4+: You are working as a waiter waitress in a restaurant. You are going to resign from your job. Write to yhe restaurant manager. In your letter: Why you are resigning? What good things you have got from your job? What you want the restaurant to do (e.g. give salary earlier, reference letter).

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