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Band 5+: You are working at a company. Write a letter to your manager to recommend opening a cafeteria at work. In your letter say – Why is it required? – Give recommendations on how and where to do it. – Explain why it would be beneficial to all workers.

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Dear manager,

I am writing to express my opinion about improving our company, my purpose to build a cafeteria at our company, as i belive it would enhance our employes productivity and healty.

Firstly, many employees currently hard to find option healthy food during their have breaks. A lot of food shop near our company mostly sell junk food this is not good if they constantly eat junk food.

I am recommand that we consider to build cafeteria on the ground floor of our building for this purpose, this location would be ideal because near to departements and easly to access for employees, we could collaborate with catering company to offer a menu healthy food like a fresh salad, vegetarain option and hot meals. Opening a cafetaria not only for lunch helathy food but also add our togetherness, coworkers can build relationships too and improved teamwork.

I am looking forward to hearing your prompt and positive response. Thank you for considering this suggestion.

Best regards,

Duke dennis

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

company: 4

build: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestions are clear and relevant. Minor improvements in clarity and structure would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the overall flow and cohesion. Improved sentence structure and grammar would significantly improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context. While the range is sufficient, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the letter's impact. Some minor lexical errors are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. A significant improvement in grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score. The range of grammatical structures is limited.

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