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Band 7+: You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -say about the concert -say why you are unable to go inform how your friend can receive the ticket

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Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you in a great mood. As you already know, I bought a ticket for the upcoming Taylor Swift’s concert, which will be held here in Vancouver. However, I’m devastated right now, because not only would my money be wasted, but I also have to miss an event that I’ve waited for almost a year.

Little did I knew, I have a exam on the following day, May 7th, and I can’t go to the concert because I have to study for my exam. I even tried to take the exam on another date, but no luck!

Anyway, I was thinking that you’re quite a fan yourself. Say, If I were to give you my ticket, would you be interested to go instead of me? If yes, please drop me a message so we can work out the details like how you can pick it up. By the way, don’t you worry about the cost. It’s no me!

Looking forward to handing over the ticket.

Love,

Arash

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear information about the concert, the reason for not attending, and the offer to the friend. The letter is well-organized and easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter flows well, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and transitions that could be improved. The use of punctuation could also be more consistent.

Lexical Resource

7.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and uses it accurately and appropriately. There are some instances where more sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The letter shows a good command of grammar, but there are some errors in sentence structure and punctuation. These errors do not significantly hinder understanding, but could be improved for greater clarity and fluency.

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