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Band 5+: You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -say about the concert -say why you are unable to go inform how your friend can receive the ticket

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Dear Raman,

I hope you are well! I am writing to inform you that I bought a ticket for music concert of Singer Shreya Ghoshal.

The concert is going to held on 12 January, 2025 at Delhi sports stadium as Singer Shreya Ghoshal wil be performing there with her band. Moreover, the management also keep the theme of few games in which Lucky winners will receive rewards.

Previously, I was over the moon to attend it whereas my important meeting fall on the same day and I got the schedule today. Therefore, I can not make it because It is mandatory for me to present there so I can give the presentation for my vital project. If I missed it, it will create big loss for my career.

Moreover, one of my friend is coming to your locality next week so if you can tell me about your availability so he can drop it at your house.

Waiting to hear from you!

Best regards!

Aman

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5
The task is mostly addressed, but some aspects could be more clearly explained.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is generally easy to follow, but some improvements in flow and paragraphing would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

5.5
A good range of vocabulary is used, but more precise word choices would improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5
While the letter conveys the message, grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and fluency.

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