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Band 4+: You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things

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Dear Sir,

I am going to give you a review about your restaurant food & service. It’s really pleasure to me to inform you that your food quality & hospitality was outstanding.

On Last Monday, Me and Some of my friends were visited your resaurant Khana Pina in Chadwell heath branch. We went there around 7pm, it was really busy on them time. Staff of the restaurant welcomed us warmly & helped us to have a sit. It was fully occupied with customer.

One of my friend Ali get scholarship for his post graduation course in London Metropolitan University. We were so happy with his success that immediately plan for joyous gathering. Therefore, we decided to come here as there have good reputation & review with your service.

We ordered a family size pizza, along with that also order 3 beef burger, chips & drinks. Waiter was approached gently to get the order, He recommend some item which has a good review all the time. Pizza & Burger was so fresh & tasty. My friends were so happy that we promise to come here again on any other occassion. I really appreciate there hosptality & food quality.

In a nutshell, Your restaurant service and quality of food was really amazing. I hope you will continue the standard of your service in future. I wish a very best of luck for your business.

Regards

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

&: 8

really: 4

review: 3

restaurant: 3

service: 3

there: 3

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Task Response

The response covers all the requirements of the task. You have provided details of the visit (time, location, and atmosphere), explained the reason for the celebration (a friend's scholarship), and described both the food and the service. The purpose of the letter is clear throughout. To improve, focus on grammatical accuracy, particularly regarding subject-verb agreement and tense consistency (e.g., 'Me and some of my friends were visited' should be 'Some of my friends and I visited'). Additionally, ensure that word choices are more natural; for example, instead of 'I am going to give you a review,' a more formal opening like 'I am writing to express my appreciation for...' would be more appropriate for a letter to a manager.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter follows a logical progression, addressing all parts of the prompt in separate paragraphs. However, the flow is frequently interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on using smoother transition words and ensuring that sentences connect logically without repetitive structures. Avoid starting sentences with 'On Last Monday' or 'In a nutshell' in a formal letter, as these can feel slightly unnatural in this context.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient to convey the message, but it is quite basic and contains several spelling and word-choice errors (e.g., 'resaurant', 'hosptality', 'on them time', 'there have good reputation'). To reach a higher band, try to use more sophisticated collocations and precise adjectives. Instead of saying 'food was so fresh & tasty', you could use 'the ingredients were exceptionally fresh and the flavors were exquisite'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors throughout the text, particularly with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and pronoun usage (e.g., 'Me and Some of my friends were visited', 'One of my friend Ali get', 'Waiter was approached gently'). There is also a heavy reliance on simple sentence structures. To improve, practice using a variety of complex sentence structures (such as relative clauses and conditional sentences) and ensure that your verb tenses are consistent, especially when describing a past event.

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