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Band 5+: You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to you in order to expresse my concern regarding my birthday celebration with my family and my friends in your restaurant. We spend a very good time, and we enjoyed, it was a great success.

Firstly, I would like to thaks you for your great service at your restaurant, it was very professional and the staff was very serious. Also, the food it was so delicious and tasty. Me and my friends we appreciate the composition of the birthday menu without forget a wonderful cocktail. In addition, we relly loved the atmosphere at the restaurant, and the music fit the theme..

I would therefore appreciate it if you could change the decoration birthday it was not gorgeous, it was for kids, I believe that you can do better with flower and balloons for adults.

Thank you for everything and for taking time to consider my request.

Yours faitherlly

Dahbia

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

birthday: 3

restaurant: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the task requirements, mentioning the food and service, expressing enjoyment of the atmosphere, and suggesting an improvement. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and varied language, and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each main point (food/service, atmosphere, suggestions). Transitions between ideas could also be smoother to enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to use more varied and precise language. For example, instead of 'very good time,' you could use 'memorable experience' or 'delightful occasion.' Try to incorporate more descriptive adjectives and synonyms to elevate your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper article usage. For example, 'thaks you' should be 'thank you,' and 'the decoration birthday it was not gorgeous' needs restructuring. Proofreading carefully will help minimize these errors.

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