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Band 7+: You celebrated your graduation with some friends and family last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my gratitude for a fantastic and memorable evening on 11th November when I visited your restaurant along with my friends and family to celebrate my graduation last week. You have definitely won me as one of your loyal customers. The ambiance was very soothing and relaxing as if we were in our homes. Both the lighting system, neither too bright nor too dim, and the symphonic music make this place a perfect spot for celebrations. The taste of the food was just out of the world. Here, I would specifically like to mention the continental dessert, a perfectly baked molten chocolate cake that left a heavenly taste in our mouths. Besides, your entire crew of staff there were friendly, attentive and served us with a smile.

However, I believe there is still some room for improvement. You may think of enhancing the speed of service and considering adding a few more items for the vegetarians who would visit your restaurant.

I hope that you would consider this suggestion. Once again, I would like to thank you for making my graduation special and enjoyable.

Yours faithfully,

Aladin

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Overall Band Score

7

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

8.5

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task, providing a positive and detailed account of the dining experience and offering constructive suggestions for improvement.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, minor issues with grammar and sentence structure slightly affect the overall flow and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

7

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with accurate and appropriate word choices. The language is mostly natural and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

While the letter displays a range of grammatical structures, a few errors affect the overall accuracy and fluency. Improved grammatical precision would enhance the overall quality.

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