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Band 5+: You found a small bag somewhere. The owner's address and name were there on the bag. Write a letter to the owner Inform where you found of the bag Write about the contents of the bag How he or she can collect it

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Dear Mr.shah,

I am writing this letter to inform you that i catched a small brown colour bag and t your name and address was mentioned on it.

Last evening, I was enjoying my leisure time at Nakhi lack which is one of the attractive place in our town I found this handbag in front of the gate. Therefore I decided to wait outsight for a while in case someone would come searching for the purse. But no one standout who find their object. However, I find out some of the documents inside the carrier such as licance, E-Cards, Debit card or a several cash also identify bank passbook and cheque book. That’s why i bring that one with me.consequendy, you can collect it from my reside place here is address l, 134, silver height satellite,Pune.I request you to call me before your arrival as I have different shift at present day.

I am looking forward for having a prompt response.

Yours Sincerely,

Vidhi

Word Count: 164

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses the task by informing the owner about the found bag, detailing its contents, and providing instructions for retrieval. The information is relevant and sufficient. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details about the bag's appearance or the exact location where it was found to aid in identification. Also, proofread carefully to eliminate minor grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is mostly adequate, but consider breaking up longer paragraphs for better readability. For example, the paragraph describing finding the bag and its contents could be split into two.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'attractive place,' you could use 'popular tourist spot.' Also, avoid informal words such as 'catched'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to verb tense consistency (e.g., 'I catched' should be 'I caught'), subject-verb agreement, and correct article usage. Also, review sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences and ensure proper punctuation.

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Band 5+: You found a small bag somewhere. The owner's address and name were there on the bag. Write a letter to the owner Inform where you found of the bag Write about the contents of the bag How he or she can collect it

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