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Band 6+: You have a full time job and are also taking an evening course several hours week. You feel that you can not continue taking the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter you should - Describe the situation Explain why you cannot continue Say what you intend to do

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Dear Ms. Stevens,

I am one of your students in Biblical Anthropology course. I am writing this to inform you that I will no longer attending our evening lesson, effectively today because of some personal reasons.

Currently, I am doing my job as a full-time pre-school teacher in Little Angels Montessori Playschool. My position there is head teacher. My responsibilities of being in that position is getting harder because I need to attend some seminars and revised our curriculum planning for our accreditation. Sadlyt, my schedule is not enough to attend our evening class anymore because when I go home, I feel exhausted and I do not have the energy to attend our evening class.

I hoping that when we finish our accreditation. I will plan my schedule to attend again in your evening class because It is also my passion to learn about biblical anthropology and how God created man. I would love to take this opportunity to grow not just professionally but also spiritually.

Thank you for your understanding. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes,

Sarvia R. Capulong

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

evening: 4

because: 4

attend: 4

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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, providing a clear description of the situation, reasons for discontinuing the course, and desired future action. The explanation is relevant and sufficient. There are a few minor grammatical errors (e.g., 'Sadlyt') and stylistic issues, but they do not significantly detract from the overall quality of the response. To improve, focus on proofreading for minor errors and refining sentence structure for clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and addresses the task requirements. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider using more explicit transitions between the description of the situation, the explanation for discontinuing the course, and the desired action. For example, you could start a new paragraph when transitioning to explaining why you cannot continue.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'attend,' you could use synonyms like 'participate in' or 'be present at.' Also, consider refining phrases like 'getting harder' to something more specific, such as 'becoming more demanding.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I will no longer attending' should be 'I will no longer be attending' or 'I will no longer attend.' Also, 'Sadlyt' appears to be a typo and should be 'Sadly.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage throughout the letter. Reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully can help improve accuracy.

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