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Band 4+: You have bought a new car from a company, but you are not satisfied with it. your email must include the following points : - the kind of the car that you bought. - where you bought it and how much it cost. - the problem with the vehicle. - what you would like the company to do about the problem.

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Dear Sir or madam,

I am writting this email to bought a new car from your company .but I am not satisfied with it.

I bought a new honda civic automatic car. it colour is black and the number of car is 1234MB .

This car is bought by honda showroom in winnipeg Manitoba. It total costs 30,000 dollars.

Resantle I am going to polo park with my family and I start my car but car is not start. I have to try in one hour but car is not working .

So I kindly requiet to company to solw my problem.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

bought: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all the points in the task, but the description of the problem and the requested solution could be more detailed and clearer. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Numerous grammatical errors impact coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated language would improve the overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and overall impression. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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