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Band 5+: You have bought a new car from a company, but you are not satisfied with it. your email must include the following points : - the kind of the car that you bought. - where you bought it and how much it cost. - the problem with the vehicle. - what you would like the company to do about the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email to tell you that few days ago I bought a new car from your company but unfortunately, I am not satisfied with it.

As I mentioned earlier , I bought this car from your Honda company which is grey in colour and has automatic door operating system . The number of car is 3730MB. Its my dream car . I work very hard to buy this car. It costs approximately 40,000 dollars.

one day I go to my friends house which is not that far from my house . So, One thing I notice about this car is that It consumes fuel very rapidly.

I just want from company to resolve my concerns immediately by replacing this car with a new one which is less in fuel consumption .

Yours Sincerely,

Sujan

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in structuring the information would enhance clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, improved sentence structure and flow would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied word choices would improve the letter's overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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