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Band 4+: You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write an email to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email, • give details of the purchase • describe the problem • explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Goodday,Iam jefrey gipo I write this letter to express dissatisfaction with a recent purchase from your online shop.As a regular costumer,I always satisfactied with your products.but unfortunately my lates experience has fallen short of my expectation.

On march 25,I order a polo shirt but sadly the item i recieve was not as expected.The shirt was a short size,and to my desmay,it also had a small hole and scracth.Moreoverthe delivery was delayed,arriving later than the estimated time.

I ungently need replacement as i intend to wear the shirt to my IELTS exam on this coming july.I have a attouched photo of the defected item to this email for your reference.

I would appreciate it if you could expedite the replacement process,insuring i correct item promptly.I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sencerily,

Jefrey gipo

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task adequately, providing the necessary details of the purchase, describing the problem, and explaining the urgency of the replacement. However, the writer could improve by providing more specific details about the purchase, such as the order number or the exact issue with the shirt. Additionally, the tone of the letter could be more polite and professional. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but there are some minor issues with cohesion. The writer uses transitional phrases, but some sentences are a bit disconnected. The use of paragraphs could be improved to create a clearer structure. Additionally, there are some minor errors in punctuation and capitalization.

Lexical Resource

The writer uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and spelling. The language is not overly complex, and some expressions are a bit informal. The writer could improve by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding minor errors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The writer demonstrates a good range of sentence structures, but there are some errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling. The writer could improve by proofreading the letter more carefully to eliminate minor errors.

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