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Band 5+: you have decided to leave your currer job and look for a new one . Write a letter to a friend . In your letter explain Why you want to leave your current job describe what kind of job you are looking for ask for some help or advice

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Dear Josh,

I hope you are doing well.

I’m writing this letter to let you know that I have decided to quit my current job and looking orward for a new one.

The reason behind leaving my cuurent job is workstress. The work environment at my company is too bad. My manager unnecessarily targeted me for no reason by giving me the extra work and expected to get it done immediatley, which is not possible at everytime. He also use inappropriate language which makes me feel unvaluable for the company.

Now, I’m looking for a new job related to my finance field. I know you’re the only one who can help me and give a honest advise regarding in which location should I search or in which company should I apply. Get in touch with me soon.

Best,

Gurpreet

Word Count: 139

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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which: 4

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the task requirements by explaining the reasons for leaving the current job, describing the desired job type, and asking for help. To improve, consider adding more specific details about the type of finance job you're seeking and the kind of advice you need. Also, proofread carefully to avoid typos. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the paragraphing could be improved to better separate the reasons for leaving the job from the request for advice. Using more cohesive devices would also enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to use more precise and varied language to describe the work environment and the desired job. For example, instead of 'too bad,' consider using 'unsupportive' or 'toxic.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on correct verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and accurate preposition usage. For example, 'looking orward' should be 'looking forward,' and 'advise regarding in which location' should be 'advice regarding which location.'

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