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Band 4+: You have decided to set up a business for which you want to avail the facility of bank loan. Write a letter to the bank manager requesting for information about the bank loan and in your letter, write the following: Why you are writing the letter What is the amount of bank loan you need When you are able to repay the loan

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Dear sir or madam

I am writing this to get some information about the zero dollar down loan scheme that was published on your website.

I want to set up a restaurant in downtown Toronto, for which i would request 1 million dollars. If i am eligible for zero dollar down payment scheme then I am willing to pay-up to 20 percent interest annually.

The food industry buisness becomes profitable in less than six months so, i am willing to commit to pay my instalments on time will also try to repay it as quickly as a decade.

Your faithfully

Sukhmanjot kaur

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more detailed and specific in its request for information. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, and the transitions between paragraphs are not smooth.

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