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Band 6+: You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

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Dear Mr. John,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the high spirits. I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding the loud music played at your home. To be honest, my son Sahil is doing prepration for competative exam helding on the next month. It is very challenging for him to study in this noisy environment.

I would really appriciated if you can either close your door properly or lower the voice of music. you can also use your headset to enjoy the music while doing your household chores. This would be best choice for both of us.

Eventually, I would inform this problem to the society onwer and take legal action against this behaviour. However, I know this situation would not be happened because you are a mature person and you would definitly understand my concern.

I look forward for positive reply from you.

Yours Sincerely,

Karmjeet Kaur

Word Count: 155

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 5

music: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, clearly explaining the problem, suggesting solutions, and outlining the action to be taken if the situation persists. The tone is generally polite and formal. To improve, consider adding specific details about the times the music is loud and the impact it has, to make the problem more concrete. Also, proofread carefully to avoid minor grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The purpose of the letter is immediately apparent. However, the transition between the suggested solutions and the potential actions could be smoother. Consider using more explicit transition phrases to guide the reader through your points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For example, instead of 'loud music,' you could use 'excessive noise levels.' While the language is polite, consider incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary to enhance the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that occasionally impede understanding. There are issues with verb tense ('helding' should be 'held'), spelling ('appriciated' should be 'appreciated', 'onwer' should be 'owner', 'definitly' should be 'definitely'), and sentence structure. While the overall message is clear, correcting these errors would significantly improve the letter's clarity and impact. Pay close attention to proofreading for these types of mistakes.

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