Band 7+: You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that some information in your magazine’s latest April edition regarding the city of Nashik is incorrect and could be portrayed as false advertisement.

In the article, it was mentioned that Nasik is the city that cultivates the best oranges. This is inaccurate, as the city that grows oranges in our state is actually Nagpur. Nasik, on the other hand, is the city that harvests the best grapes and wine in the country. It was further mentiond that orange picking is an activity that can be done here during the holidays, which again is false.

I believe it is important for your magazine to give accurate information as people who visit this city after reading the article would end up being disappointed. This will not only set a bad reputation to a city that thrives on tourism, but also give a bad impression to your reputable magazine.

I would highly suggest that this error is rectified immidiately, either in your magazine’s upcoming May edition, or through online newsletters and on your social media platforms.

I look forward to seeing this mistake corrected.

Sincerely,

Pallavi