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Band 4+: You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter as I came across an article features my home town in the travel magazine. The article states wrong name of the town. I would like you to rectify the situation about it.

Although, its well described and informative article but the name is misprinted in it. There is another town with printed name which might be ambiguous for the audience. Also, Tourists might mis interpretate the town authenticity which eventually leads to low revenue for the town.

I would like you to reprint a small section addressing the incorrect name and share the correct name to the readers. I hope you would take my suggestion into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Lalit

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

4.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but could be more detailed and persuasive in its arguments. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraphing. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact.

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