Band 6+: You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or madam,

I am writing to you to express my disappointment regarding the article that you published in an international travel magazine. After scrutinizing the article, I found some inaccuracies about our town.

Information that need correction, Our town was established in the 16th century but you mentioned that it was founded in the 17th century in your article. The central area of our town is congested, and there is unavailability of adequate parking. Moreover, it is not accurate that a few amenities are available there.

It is crucial to give correct details because your one wrong statement can make a negative impact on reader’s perception. It will be detrimental for the reputation and economic growth of our town. Moreover, it may leads to decrease in tourism that can stifle local business.

As per my suggestion, it is prudent to halt the publication of the further copies of the magazine and make the necessary corrections before proceeding. In addition, if possible you could post a vlog on social media and apologize your mistake about the inaccuracies in the article.

I hope you will give priority to this matter promptly. I am delighted that you consider our town’s article in your reputed magazine.

Yours sincerely,

David