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Band 5+: You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to report regarding some of the wrong information published in your last week India today international article about our town. Firstly, our town is famous for temples. Each temple was constructed thousand years ago. In the article the information was mentioned as temples built a decade back. On the other hand, we can taste delicious food. Instead of that, it was published as, food quality is not good in our suburb.

Travel magazine is one of the primary sources where people know about our city and what it is famous for. Because of publishing wrong data in the article, people will get misinformation about our town and there is a chance of downfall in tourism industry.

In order to correct this incident, I suggest concern writer to make certain changes and republish the data in next article. So that there will not be any mislead will happen in future and reputation of India today also retained.

Thank you for your consideration and take prompt action immediately on behalf of this issue.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon

Yours Sincerely,

John Smith

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing corrections, explaining the importance of accuracy, and suggesting a solution. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To improve, ensure that the tone remains consistently formal throughout the letter. Also, pay close attention to grammatical accuracy and word choice to enhance clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally organized, but the flow of ideas could be smoother. Transitions between points could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, when transitioning from correcting the information to explaining the importance of accuracy, a clearer link could be established. Paragraphing is adequate but could be refined to better group related ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there are instances where more precise word choices could enhance the impact. For example, instead of 'wrong information,' consider using 'inaccurate details' or 'misrepresentations.' Expanding the range of vocabulary would improve the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'temples built a decade back' should be 'temples built a decade ago.' Additionally, 'there will not be any mislead will happen' should be 'there will not be any misleading information.' Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct verb tense usage to enhance grammatical accuracy.

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