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Band 4+: You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs Begin as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to ask for more infomation about your sport club.

I am a first student at a college nearly. I have just discovered that my college have not provided any sport facilities as of yet. However, I found your club to be the nearest on Facebook. I would really like to apply for one of your club.

First of all, I appreciate I you inform me about how big the gym is and what kind of equipment it has.

Next, I would like yo know more about the price and whether there are any promotions for new members.

Lastly, could you please give me some infomation about trainers at your club as well as their qualification.

Thank you for considering my request.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task by introducing the writer, expressing interest in the sports club, and asking relevant questions about facilities, costs, and trainers. However, there are some inaccuracies and missing information that slightly affect the overall task response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are issues with paragraphing and some awkward phrasing that hinder the flow of the letter. Consider organizing the information more clearly and using transition words to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are several spelling and word choice errors throughout the letter. Work on improving the accuracy of vocabulary usage to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are numerous grammatical errors present, such as subject-verb agreement, article usage, and preposition errors. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy to boost the score in this criterion.

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