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Band 6+: You have learned about an international job that is available within the company you currently work for and you want to apply. Write a letter to the hiring manager. In your letter Say why you are applying for this international position Describe the job you are currently doing for the company Tell him/her why you think you will be good at the job

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Hi Andrea,

I am writing to apply for the position of Financial analyst in the Chicago head office. I am currently working in the Toronto team as an Accountant, and I believe my knowledge about the company processes and technical skills are closely aligned with the new opportunity. Furthermore, I am working closely with the Chicago team on reporting and processes development, though it would be easy for me to become a part of a new team.

Currently I am involved in customer billing, reviewing the aging report and following up with the client managers on the revenue forecasts. Other than that, I am managing a revenue tool in our ERP, to ensure all the revenue was recognized according to our company’s policies and legislation. I believe my professional qualification and experience make me a perfect candidate for this role as it’s aligned to the job description requirements . It would be an amazing opportunity for me to contribute more to the company’s prosperity by applying the right knowledge and experience I gain while working here.

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss further details of the position with you.

King regards,

Hanna Biliak

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

working: 3

opportunity: 3

would: 3

revenue: 3

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Task Response

6

The letter addresses all three points mentioned in the task - why the applicant is applying for the international position, description of the current job, and reasons for suitability. However, more specific details about why the international position is appealing and how the applicant's skills align with the new role could be included for a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is well-organized with clear paragraphs for each point. The ideas flow logically, and there is good use of cohesive devices. However, some transitions could be smoother to enhance coherence further.

Lexical Resource

6.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used appropriately throughout the letter. The language is mostly precise and accurate, contributing to a formal tone. To improve further, consider incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary and expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures and grammatical accuracy. Punctuation is used correctly. To aim for a higher score, ensure consistency in verb tense usage and watch out for minor errors in subject-verb agreement.

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