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Band 6+: You have learned about an international job that is available within the company you currently work for and you want to apply. Write a letter to the hiring manager. In your letter Say why you are applying for this international position Describe the job you are currently doing for the company Tell him/her why you think you will be good at the job

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The reason I am addressing this letter to you is that want to apply for the position.

To commence, I would like to explain why I am eager to apply for this position. The action cited reasons include being ill and not staying on top of my workload. Therefore, I was laid off a year ago ,yet I could not implement my workload enough because of problems with my mother’s illness.

Beforehand, I worked as a freelancer with online video and they helped me by facilitating my professional development in telecommuting. I am enthusiastically applying for this job. I firmly believe that a combination of my skills and personality makes me an ideal candidate for the role. I consider myself to be workaholic thereby possessing strong management, IT skills because my performance review is very good.

I enclose my CV and I would be glad to attend interview at any time convenient to you.

Yours faithfully,

Shahzoda

Word Count: 157

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, stronger justification for the candidate's suitability for the international position would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure and flow could be improved. Some sentences lack a clear connection to the preceding ones, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but a wider range of more sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter is understandable, there are grammatical inaccuracies and inconsistencies that affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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