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Band 5+: You have learned about an international job that is available within the company you currently work for and you want to apply. Write a letter to the hiring manager. In your letter Say why you are applying for this international position Describe the job you are currently doing for the company Tell him/her why you think you will be good at the job

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To whom it may concern.

I am writing this letter to apply for the post of head manager as of head manager as advertised on AESC worker.com. I have started this work to as I like working with other international companies and other business traders, and, I would enjoy the challenge of competitiveness. I have been working in this company as a Head of the devision, and I have some experience – My qualifications include foreign language and management. I have good organisational skills . When I was in my final year at school I have organised many events and controlled The class. You will be really happy if you will apply me and company will achieve many success I promise that I will try not to make any mistake. I will try to make company big and famous over the world. The company will become the most successful and become people’s favourite in the entire world. I will be grateful if you will recruit me.

Yours faitifully. (153 words)

Miles.

Word Count: 171

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and persuasive.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure and flow are somewhat disjointed. Improving the organization and logical sequencing of ideas would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is functional but lacks range and precision. A wider vocabulary and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

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