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Band 7+: You have not seen your friend, who lives overseas, for two years. Invite them to visit your hometown. In your letter: Why visiting your hometown is a good idea Tell them that they could stay at your place Ask them if it is possible for them to bring their camera

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Dear Anant,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to invite you to explore my hometown so that we could spend some quality time together. A new museum has opened recently in our town, which has a great collection of ancient art works and novels. Moreover, you have never visited the largest zoo of our country, which is located near the museum.

Although there are many hotels available in the town, you could stay with us in our apartment, as there is a separate guest room available with our accommodation. Furthermore, it will allow us with plenty of hours to enjoy movies together.

I would reccommend that you bring your digital camera and its charger with you for the trip because you will have numerous opportunities to click animal’s photos in the zoo. However, your mobile phone can be used to take fascinating pictures, I would suggest, you should use your HD camera for better picture quality.

I look forward to seeing you soon.

Best regards,

Subhas Kundu

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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. The invitation is clear, reasons for the visit are provided, and the offer of accommodation is made. The request regarding the camera is also present.

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The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, minor improvements in flow and paragraphing could enhance the overall coherence.

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6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied. While there is a good range of words, some more sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to enhance the lexical resource.

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5.5

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