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Band 4+: You have read a news article in the local newspaper about a city or a town you know, and some of the information was incorrect. Write a letter to the news editor. In your letter: • say how do you know about the city or town • explain what information was wrong • suggest how the editor could fix this error

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Dear sir/madam,

I am xxx, big follower of reading your articles since my adulthood which acknowledge me with update news and event around india.past week I read your recently published articles I was disappointed while reading it.

The information about hospital was wrong , because I knew this hospital from 2011 and now I have been working as charge nurse. Some matter which you discussed was incorrect and I will tell the real scenario and goodness of hospital service which had provided till date through the mail along with some photographs. I hope you definitely change the mistake part in your article and republish it.

Thanking you,

Yours faithfully,

Xxx

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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The letter adequately addresses the task, but the explanation of the incorrect information could be more detailed and specific. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The sentences are not always connected logically, making it difficult to follow the message.

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The vocabulary is adequate, but there are some instances of word choice that could be improved for clarity and precision.

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