Band 9: You have read a news article in the local newspaper about a city or a town you know, and some of the information was incorrect. Write a letter to the news editor. In your letter: • say how do you know about the city or town • explain what information was wrong • suggest how the editor could fix this error

Dear Sir,

I am writing this to express my dissatisfaction with the recently published article about the city of Barrie. The article contains several errors that need to be edited.

I work in the field of tourism and hospitality with a reputed company in Canada. Since working as a digital nomad, I have needed to explore and travel a lot to different places. Additionally, I stayed in Barrie for a month where I researched business opportunities for youngsters. I observed that there are plenty of retired people who want to live their lives peacefully, and I got to know about the numerous aspects of the city.

As for the wrong information, the writer claimed that the city has many historical attractions that only belong to specific people. This information is incorrect as the history of this city is enriched with many events from different ages. Moreover, you barely find any historic ruins as it does not have that many attractions.

I believe that the writer needs to edit the article and pay more attention to this information. I would prefer that the writer could use some photos to describe the details, and I would be glad to assist by sending you some supplementary photos. I can be contacted at the address mentioned above.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Fady Abdelmalek