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Band 5+: You have recently move to the different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. Why you have moved. Describe about your house and invite new friend to come and visit

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Dear John,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I shifted to new house recently which is located near my workplace and invite you to visit and stay at my house for the coming weekend.

I moved here because my old house is located in the countryside area which is far from my office and I had to travel for three hours everyday to reach my workplace. Therefore, My family suggested me to shift from village to the urban area and I bought this house three months ago.

It is a single story house which include three bedroom with attached bathroom, a kitchen , a drawing room and a living room. In addition, there is a small garden in the front and kitchen garden in the backyard. The house is furnished with modern design and technology such as automated taps and showers and so on.

I’d also like to invite you to come over to my new house in Delhi this weekend and spend some quality time together. If you’d make it , it is going to be an incredible weekend.

Let me know if you’re able to come.

Keep in touch,

Gurpreet Kaur

Word Count: 196

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

house: 7

which: 3

three: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The reasons for moving are clearly explained, the new house is described, and a clear invitation is extended. Minor improvements in the clarity of expression would elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow. However, some improvements in sentence structure and flow would enhance the overall coherence and cohesion. The logical progression of ideas could be strengthened.

Lexical Resource

6

A good range of vocabulary is used, although some choices could be more precise and sophisticated. The language is generally accurate and appropriate for the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical inaccuracies that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy and range would significantly enhance the score.

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