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Band 5+: You have recently moved into a new flat. Unfortunately, you lost some money the other day, and cannot afford to pay next month's rent when it is due. Write a letter to the landlord or landlady. In your letter • explain the situation • say that you will pay when your parents send you the money • Mention that there are some problems with the flat.

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Dear mr Paul,

I am writing this letter to tell you about a problem I had last week. In fact, last Sunday I was

On the way to go to te supermarket and suddenly a pickpocket brutally stole my wallet and my

Phone. The problem is that I don’t have any money for the rest of the month and I can’t pay you

At time the rent of the flat. I am going to look with my parent to see if they can give me money

As soon as possible ans I will send you the amount of the rent.

I am really embarrassed of this situation and I will take care that I will not restart this mistake.

I hope that we will find solutions for the bathroom problem and for the kitchen window soon

Best regards

Raphaël

Word Count: 139

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

problem: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in explaining the situation and the problems with the flat. More specific information would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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