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Band 4+: You have recently moved to a new city and want to invite your friends to visit you. Write a letter to your friends inviting them to come. You should include details about: - when you would like them to visit - what accommodation options are available - the attractions and activities you want to share with them during their stay.

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Hello guys

I finally moved to a new city ,And i got all the apartment done .

So i thought of inviting you for a sleepover at my house ,We are going to have a lot of fun im planning on doing so much activities.

I have a cinema room so we are going to watch a movie first,Then we are going to the swimming pool and the compound gym .

Furthermore , we will have so much fun during the special night i planned for us .

At conclusion im really looking forwad to spend the night with you , I hope you won’t be busy.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

going: 3

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Task Response

The letter attempts to address all parts of the task, but the details provided are quite limited. To improve, elaborate more on the specific dates for the visit, the accommodation arrangements, and the attractions you plan to share. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a clear overall progression, but the flow between ideas could be smoother. Using a wider range of cohesive devices and improving paragraphing would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, but a wider range of words and more precise language would strengthen the letter. Consider using more varied and descriptive vocabulary to express your ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter uses a mix of simple and some complex structures, but there are noticeable errors in grammar and punctuation that occasionally impede understanding. Focusing on accuracy and a broader range of grammatical structures would be beneficial.

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