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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a new house. Write a letter to a friend to invite them to a housewarming party. In your letter: - Tell them about your new house - Explain when the party is - Suggest what they can bring

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Dear Henry,

I hope this letter finds you in good health & spirits, It is a long time to see you .

I recently relocated to a new residence on redberg street ,it is a penthouse of 3 bedroom , it has all facilities ,for instance fully furnished with a modern kitchen ,swimming pool and indoor gym.

I am organising a get-together party on my house , i would like you to join us on 24 September Sunday evening at 5:00 pm to midnight .

To cite an example of childhood friendship ,I request you to bring a painting for my dinning room i am so glad to see you on sunday.

Meet you soon!

Yours lovingly

Saksham

Word Count: 118

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task, providing details about the new house, the party, and a suggestion for a gift. However, the letter could be more engaging and personal. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear flow and structure. The paragraphs are not well-organized, and the transitions between ideas are not smooth. The use of phrases like 'to cite an example' and 'for instance' feels awkward and disrupts the natural flow of the letter.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely appropriate for the context. The use of 'relocated' and 'residence' feels formal and could be replaced with more casual language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and readability. The use of punctuation and sentence structure needs improvement.

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