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Band 4+: You have recently purchased a gift item for your friend. Write a letter to your friend? - Tell him about the gift - Tell how you want to send the gift to your friend - Explain why you chose the gift for your friend.

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Dear raj,

I’m writing this letter my friend raj.

I hope you doing well. Their so mane type of the phone but I recently purchased a gift smart phone.

There are lots of transport in our country such as Kabra, Fedex, Bluedart, etc. I chose that Kabra because it fast delivery and most popular in our country. However, the most convenient and batter for me than easily to sand for you.

Furthermore, I chose smart phone because lots of benefit in your life for example, you are easy to help full for sturdy as well as combined sturdy with your friend. You have a mobile phone than all vest is not alone feel. However, you are all time calling, chatting, and their so many activity in smart phone than more convenient for you. You have a laser time rather than you should do extras work. I think most important gift for you.

Your friend

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

phone: 4

friend: 3

smart: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all aspects of the task. However, the explanation of the gift choice could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear and logical flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the writing is disjointed in places.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of inaccurate or inappropriate word choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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