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Band 5+: You have recently purchased a gift item for your friend. Write a letter to your friend? - Tell him about the gift - Tell how you want to send the gift to your friend - Explain why you chose the gift for your friend.

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Dear John,

I am writing this letter to you congratulation on buying a new house, which you have dreamt a few years ago, now your dream is come true. On this occasion I send a gift for your new house.

Yesterday I received a mail from you getting a new house, shared some pictures of new house, that time I felt happy after read it. So I decided to give you a gift which is very useful for you. I decided to do some rassing art that is quite popular these days. After that, I searched online and contact to the shopkeeper and shared a picture of our childhood. He make it within two days. I know this gift is valuable for you, even you can hang this on yours room, and also enhance the beauty of your room. When you enter to your room, you will refresh your nostalgia memories. Please share me the address of your new house so I can send a courier to you as soon.

yours lovingly,

Manpreet Kaur

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

house: 4

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the connection between the gift and the housewarming could be more explicitly stated.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some sentences lack clarity and smooth transitions, impacting the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies are present, affecting the overall clarity and fluency of the letter.

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