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Band 4+: You have recently started work at new company write letter to your friend Why you changed your job Describe your new job Tell her other news

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Hello

I hope you are very well, I want to tell

you that I changed my job. As you know, I was warking in warehouse. as I didn’t like my job and I totally fed up from this labour job because I had not opportunity to learn more I always wanted a stable job in my IT field.

Nowadays, As I did diploma in computing support, I got job at laptop reparing shop named Latino System Mobile. I love this job because I don’t have any stress and tiredness any more. Also, I can learn more and make my future in IT field.

Apart from this, I have a news for you that I will be going to india with you next month because of my new job. They are giving me 2 weeks summer vaccations. So, we can enjoy together.

See you soon,

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The letter attempts to address the task, but the content is not fully developed. The reasons for changing jobs, the description of the new job, and the additional news could be expanded upon to provide a more comprehensive response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The organization of the letter is basic, and the flow of ideas is not always smooth. Transitions between points could be improved to enhance coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to separate distinct topics.

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The vocabulary used is limited and lacks precision. There is an attempt to convey the message, but the language does not demonstrate a wide range or sophisticated control. Consider using more varied and specific vocabulary to enhance the impact of your writing. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The grammatical range is limited, and there are noticeable errors in sentence structure, verb tense, and punctuation. These errors impede clarity and affect the overall quality of the writing. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of sentence structures.

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